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12月8日亚太区雅思小作文分析

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发表于 2018-12-19 14:12:16 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 环球教育 于 2018-12-19 14:13 编辑

小作文题目:
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本次小作文是折线图,和大陆地区3月24日的相同。对比描述了从10月第一周到11月第三周中,火车延误和取消的比率。
如下文章供大家参考:
The graphs indicate the changing proportion which delayed and cancelled trains represented during the seven weeks from the first one of October.

When it comes to the rate of delayed trains, it witnessed a stable increase from 20% to 30% in the first week of October, followed by a considerably downward movement to 10% in the next two weeks. After restoring itself, outstripping the most serious level to the peak of 50% in the second week of November, it was blessed with a partial recovery to 30% in the end.

Turning to the ratio of cancelled trains, the story also experiences a sharp fluctuation. To be specific, it suffered from a significant rise from 3% to 7% one week later, when it started to return to its original level in the following week. From this point on, it went ups and downs dramatically during the remaining time, hitting the bottoms of 2% twice in the fourth week of October and second one of November.

Seen from the charts, the rate of both delayed and cancelled trains changed largely and on the whole the problems became more serious during the given time.


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